bpl4269 Posted October 29, 2013 Report Share Posted October 29, 2013 Trudging through the mental anguish I'm unwillingly forced to endure. Slumber transforms into my subconcious sanctuary. An escape from the disturbing reality that plagues my waking existence. I arise from a deep slumber. My visual cortex is immediately bombarded with external stimuli of insignificant nature. Dissociation disrupts my fragile sense of self, and the weight of the world rests heavy on my weakened shoulders. This is my reality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
onedayillsailagain Posted October 29, 2013 Report Share Posted October 29, 2013 I like it bpl. I might add some of my attempts at poetry later. Thanks for sharing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wakeupyourdreaming Posted November 11, 2013 Report Share Posted November 11, 2013 Fading falling lost in forever can I find a way to keep it togather Am I strong enough to last through the weather In the hurricane of my life Can it be a concious decision as I look for ways to alter my vision Am I speeding towards another collision In the alleyways of my life? Memories don't lieYou know better thanMemories don't lieYou know better thanThose who have fallen Shaking, burning up with the feverIn the realm of pain, I am the deceiverNow I lie to myself, so I can believe herAs she disassembles my lifeI cannot dispel the illusionAll my hopes and dreams are drowned by confusionCan I find a way to make a solution that will reconfigure my life? Please believe meThat my ears deceive meDon't stand me upJust leave meAnd I know that stillness shattersWe have all been frightened by the sound of footsteps on the pavement of our livesI stand and fightI'm not afraid to dieElochai, bury me tonightPlease believe meThat the world deceives meDon't stand me upJust leave meI have fallen againThis is the endPain redefined Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wakeupyourdreaming Posted November 11, 2013 Report Share Posted November 11, 2013 I've been to hell try to believe me The world behind the curtain Shows you how this worlds deceives thee Once its over feelings are faint A distance between you and reality Can you ever hope to recover From such a montrosity It sneaks up to your mind As if though from your spine Suddenly you start to contemplate Eternity and divinity and feel your fragile mind breaking seeing things never meant for you to see experiencing it all forever in the sadest moments of your history Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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